by May G., Saratoga Open TikTok, Instagram, or even Facebook, and the same thing pops up: AI is everywhere. It edits your photos, suggests videos, and even finishes your sentences. So why is school trying to pretend it doesn’t exist? Tools like ChatGPT are becoming...
Student Writing Samples
These essays were written by middle and high school students in our English tutoring and writing program. They demonstrate analytical thinking, vocabulary development, reading comprehension, and structured academic writing.
Our systematic writing curriculum helps students develop stronger grammar, more sophisticated vocabulary, and clearer analytical writing skills over time.
In an era of AI-generated writing and declining academic standards, strong analytical writing skills matter more than ever.
Why we featured this essay:
- — Disciplined argument structure
- — Sophisticated, AI-era vocabulary
- — Original thesis, supported with evidence
- — Reflects months of weekly writing practice
The Collection
My Favorite Place (So Far)
by Andrew J., Chapel Hill, NC Lots of people have a favorite place to visit. Some people like the beach, and some people prefer the mountains, and some people like to go to restaurants and museums. But lots of people love to visit other countries. Countries can...
The Iron Role Model
by K. L., San Jose Role models are people who others look up to. They are those who can inspire others. Iron Man is a character from the Marvel Universe. He is a genius, billionaire, playboy, philanthropist who is the CEO of Stark Industries. He has 270 IQ, being one...
Nature’s Canvas
by Shivali H. Patra Amidst the forest’s vast and tangled green, I roam beneath the shadows and the light. Ancient trees whisper, yet remain unseen, And nature paints its canvas pure and bright. Among the roots that anchor in the earth, I tread the path where sunbeams...
Criminal Politicians?
by Henry Ko, Palo Alto With the 2024 election just around the corner, the presidential candidates are narrowing down. One of the politicians who is running for president has a criminal record, and his running for the top spot in our nation has provoked some...
When You Give Me Free Time
by K. L., Cupertino Imagine doing homework all day. That would be terribly boring. Everyone has hobbies, such as collecting quarters, playing Valorant past midnight, or trying out different makeup looks. While most of those activities sound fun, I like to spend my...
Mark Rober: This Generation’s Bill Nye
By G. W., Los Altos One click is all it takes to access the world. Science, art, video games, and political commentary—these are just some of the topics which the millions of YouTube videos uploaded to the site each day cover. With so much content, what really stands...
Healthy Competition, Healthy Kids
by L. L., Los Altos Andrew Whitworth, a successful NFL athlete, once said, “If you’re a true warrior, competition doesn’t scare you. It makes you better.” But what is competition, at its core? Is it pitting students against each other and encouraging them to put...
Weaving Through Traffic
by David L., Palo Alto Today, when you go to work, most of the roads you travel on are very congested and filled with cars. Even on the widest of highways, each lane is filled with hundreds of automobiles. With everyone trying to get to their destination safely,...
Pledge of Allegiance
by Niveda A., Milpitas When I was in sixth grade, I was an incredibly nationalistic young person. I used to think that the United States was a flawless nation, including a perfect legal system, government, and society. Also when...
Clothing in Anne of Green Gables
by Alice L., Cupertino In the book Anne of Green Gables, Anne undergoes many developments and changes as she grows up. Anne starts the story as an unloved orphan, but she ultimately grows into a young school teacher who can take care of others. From an ugly wincey...
Chips
by N. W., Los Gatos The following essay was written as part of IYE’s biannual timed writing assessment. We’ve left in a few minor errors because the essay is well written. It’s impressive work, and even more impressive in that it was written in 45 minutes. Chips...
Summer Should Be Fun
by Nidhi S., Pleasanton The following essay was written as part of IYE’s biannual timed writing assessment. We’ve left in a few minor errors because the essay is well written. It’s impressive work, and even more impressive in that it was written in 45 minutes. Summer...
No Ordinary Medicine
by A. Zhang, Cupertino Cancer exists as one of today’s most deadly illnesses. Millions die each year around the world with no solution, and many of them cannot afford the treatment. However, the cure to cancer would solve all those problems. When this illness finally...
Chess
by Benjamin Wu, Palo Alto Of the many games that exist currently, one of my favorites is chess. It is a game that has been around for thousands of years. Currently, it is played by millions of people, with some even devoting their careers to it in hopes that they will...
Keep Access to Streaming Video Platforms at School
by Cayden Gu, Palo Alto Following the global spread of TikTok, videos have become the most important form of content. From copy cats like Instagram Reels to Youtube Shorts, videos have become a necessity for living and learning in a 21st century world. However, the...
Dogs
by greenbookworm3, Sunnyvale Have you ever been to one of your friend’s house and they said, “Are you okay with having an animal around you? It’s a…” I don’t know about you, but I certainly have. My parents have never had pets other than fish. I have always wondered...
The Ghirardelli Chocolate Caramel Squares TV Ad
by Niveda A., Milpitas The Ghirardelli Chocolate Caramel Squares TV Ad is the worst piece of video media ever produced in the history of mankind. Every time I watch it, an intense wave of rage and hatred sweeps through me. To clarify, I am not exaggerating. The ad...
Play the Piano
by Max Wang, Palo Alto The following essay was written as part of IYE’s biannual timed writing assessment. We’ve left in a few minor errors because the essay is outstanding in its organization, examples, and creativity. It’s impressive work, and even more impressive...
“The” or “A”
by Anna Yang, Austin ‘The’ or ‘A’ sets the tone for a story. Can you feel the aura changing as soon as you hear ‘the,’ a definite, distinctive, person that we all should have known beforehand or ‘a,’ an arbitrary human randomly selected? ‘A’ distances readers; ‘the’...
One Blows Away the Dust
by J. L., Sunnyvale One blows away the dust, And opens the hard, leather cover. The smell is of old papyrus, Evoking clouds of nostalgia. The pages wrinkle and crackle, like senile firecrackers. Warmth is rediscovered at the touch of the page; Stories that were...
“These essays reflect the cumulative effect of systematic vocabulary development, analytical reading, grammar instruction, and structured writing practice over time.”
